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Review #4251503
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Writing For G.O.T  [18+]
A folder for my writing August 2017 & July 2016
by Joy
         Review for entry/chapter: "Week 2- Day 3- Poem- After the Storm" 
Review of Writing For G.O.T  
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*Balloonp* Hiya Joy! I hope you are recovering from GOT! I am happy to do a review to celebrate you! *Delight*


*Clouds* Wow! I so enjoyed reading your evocative poem. The imagery is so vital and alive and the repeating verse-a rhyming couplet is like a song refrain and adds to the atmosphere. The undertones are potent.

*Rain* I was lured into the first verse with its clarity and appealing soundscape, which you continued in the next verses. I love the alliteration, some inner rhyme and your use of consonance and assonance is so effective. "drift, lift, whisper", "gate will grate", "brush, bramble and thorn"! It was so fun to read. oh and "flowerless hours"! *Thumbsup*

I liked to ponder your ideas like "age denies.."

*Wind* The piece feels rather haunting and each verse has a different image ending with the "you" and "I" interaction in the third. Pain is stirring.

Thanks for sharing your vision and elegant word craft! *Starstruck*

Light on the path as you write on!
eyestar
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