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| (4.0)  HIya survivor 48 I am happy to do a review to celebrate you!  I was drawn to this evocative title that made me curious. The tagline brought a picture to my mind of racing the wind--as I thought how does one chase destiny.  Good hook.The first line set the stage with a punch and the vocabulary suits the theme. The idea of a life plot is cool! The comparison of the life actor and the animal is interesting as it gives the idea that we are always seeking answers. Nice one! Each verse has its own message and the first three seem to narrate while the last one addresses the reader directly encouraging us to keep reading---I assume that it means destiny is for us to discover as we go. I am not sure of the last line-how do you please a response?  I think you mean our curiosity will be satisfied. Maybe a tweak is needed here. Your poems always give pause for pondering and I appreciate the philosophical themes. Thanks for sharing your vision.  Light on the path as you write on! eyestar ** Image ID #1815342 Unavailable **  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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