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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hi ~ Santa Sisco ~ ,

I enjoyed your poem. It flowed like a smooth river. I saw no obstacles hindering the flow, not just of the poem, but of the emotions too.

The mood was sad and dark. I saw some despair:
I give up, give in . . .
. . .I completely surrender
I liked it so much.

The ending's great since writing saved the persona. I find writing therapeutic. Well done *Starr*. Write on!

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