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Review #4252022
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 On The Event Horizon of a Black Hole  [ASR]
A Free Verse Poem about Faith
by Prosperous Snow celebrating
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* You visited me recently with a nice review, so I meandered over to see what's cooking here. Hopefully there won't be any beef products served!

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I absolutely love your title, Neva! This could mean that this is a time contemplating one's mortality or death or even making a life changing choice. Something big is being decided or embarked upon here.

The reference to taking a leap of faith is implied, but not explicit. You don't have to spell it out and leave it for the reader to deduce for his or herself. This is always a good thing when writers leave something to the reader's imagination.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup*This part was my favorite:

Poised
on the edge of eternity
self struggles
to maintain its hold
on matter.

This could apply to how you try to maintain your focus after a horrendous loss. Or, it could be with a bad diagnosis. I had one of those recently, so that is what I bring to the mix. I had to try and figure out how to fight to carry on and whether it was even worth it anymore.

I think this is brilliant! Well done!


HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

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