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My Sweet Girl on Her 8th Birthday



What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow*You visited me recently with a nice review, so I am meandering over to read and send you a review for your fine poem about sibling behaviors.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* With brothers and sisters, it is hard sometimes to ever agree to disagree. I don't know why that is. Maybe it is because they are always in competition for attention from the parents.

This poem is about a particularly rough little sister, who knows some wrestling moves to use. This sounds like it could have been a very painful injury inflicted on the elder sibling. But what can you do then? Not much.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup* I particularly like this part:

"She blocks me while sporting a grin
I laugh 'til I cry; then I finally give in."

You really have to watch the sneaky moves of the younger ones in the family. I have seen some real pain caused by "unintentional" roughness. My dog, Boo, and I have learned the hard way to keep an eye on little ones.

I enjoyed reading your poem very much!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 
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