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"I'm trying to write something here..."  [13+]
A brief discussion with the Grim Reaper
by Angus
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi Jim,

I saw that you posted this story in your notebook so I decided to read it.

I liked that the whole of it was dialogue between two dark characters. I realized that in such a piece, I don't need to struggle to know who said what; it just flowed and I understood it all.

Great work. Write on!
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