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Remnants  [13+]
She looked at the dark landscape. "Sins of the fathers." A Short Shots Entry
by 🌕 HuntersMoon
Review of Remnants  
Review by Lonewolf
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hello, I am reviewing your story as a judge for "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest" . Thanks for entering! It has been a pleasure to read and review your work, please remember any thoughts or suggestions written or implied in my review are based only on my opinion. Thank you for entering and Good Luck!




*Tools* [Spelling Errors/Grammar]
None that I could find.

*Pencil* [Ending Thoughts]
I thought this was a pretty good story. The characters were well developed and dialogue between them was natural, and engaging. I couldn't tell how the image prompt played into the story. The descriptions used within the story were great, and overall it was a great read. Well done!





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