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 Review #4252655 |
| Hello, I am reviewing your story as a judge for "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest"  . Thanks for entering! It has been a pleasure to read and review your work, please remember any thoughts or suggestions written or implied in my review are based only on my opinion. Thank you for entering and Good Luck! [Overall Impression] An intriguing story filled with longing, hope, sadness and love.  [Spelling Errors/Grammar] None that I could find.  [Suggestions] None other than please add more to this story.  [Favorite line]“Going to discover the truth for myself!” This line here sets the story of for a smooth transition to the end. [Ending Thoughts] A wonderful and original take on the image for the contest. I found myself with questions of just what Tanni and Jix were, coupled with how their society works. I enjoyed reading your story, but if possible, I'd like to read more to understand what they are, and how they came to be. Well done!  
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