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 | Dr. Beverly Siver  [13+] Bev, a resolute scientist, aims to solve a mystery. But not all puzzles should be solved.  |
| (4.0)| Hello, I am reviewing your story as a judge for "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest" . Thanks for entering! It has been a pleasure to read and review your work, please remember any thoughts or suggestions written or implied in my review are based only on my opinion. Thank you for entering and Good Luck! [Spelling Errors/Grammar] None that I could find.  [Ending Thoughts] I thought this was a great story. I loved how the reader was just thrown in the middle of the action. I also enjoyed the way you used the image prompt. I enjoyed the descriptions used within the story. The characters Trope and Beverly were well written, and the dialogue throughout the story. helped with the ease of reading. 
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You responded to this review 08/30/2016 @ 12:23am EDT