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| (5.0)| Hello, I am reviewing your story as a judge for "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest" . Thanks for entering! It has been a pleasure to read and review your work, please remember any thoughts or suggestions written or implied in my review are based only on my opinion. Thank you for entering and Good Luck! [Spelling Errors/Grammar] None that I could find.  [Favorite line]Rock spurs glistened at the edges of the roughly circular room, and the water drops echoed off the walls pleasantly. El Corazon looked like the inside of Superman's fortress of solitude, except made of rock, not ice. I thought this was a beautiful visual that something easy to imagine as I thought the fortress of solitude was an amazing place.  [Ending Thoughts] Well, the story you have told is a definite, wow. I began reading your tale and thought it was going to just be about Spelunking, but it so much more, and that just blew me away. Brielle and Danilo were excellent characters. Brielle preoccupied in deep thought while Danilo trying to figure out and waiting for her to spill whatever it was. I had assumed it was one thing, but the end was just so good. Thank you for sharing!  
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You responded to this review 08/23/2016 @ 2:46am EDT