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 Healing Pool  [18+]
The hidden pool had powers WC 1589
by Quick-Quill
Review of Healing Pool  
Review by Lonewolf
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Hello, I am reviewing your story as a judge for "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest" . Thanks for entering! It has been a pleasure to read and review your work, please remember any thoughts or suggestions written or implied in my review are based only on my opinion. Thank you for entering and Good Luck!




*Tools* [Spelling Errors/Grammar]
None that I could find.

*Pencil* [Ending Thoughts]
I quite enjoyed the story you told here. The beginning really drew me in, and I found myself wanting to read even more. The characters Nickle and Mercury was unique in their own right. The use of the image prompt was well executed. I felt the action, dialogue, and descriptions were very helpful in making this an easy read. Well done!





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