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 Review #4252665 |
| (5.0)| Hello, I am reviewing your story as a judge for "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest" . Thanks for entering! It has been a pleasure to read and review your work, please remember any thoughts or suggestions written or implied in my review are based only on my opinion. Thank you for entering and Good Luck! [Spelling Errors/Grammar] None that I could find.  [Favorite line]"What did we discuss about that delete key? You really need to quit using it!" "I know, I know. But--" "No buts. Do. Not. Use. It. Forget you have one. Write through it and we can figure it out later. You know the drill." I love the above, it's an argument I have with myself often while writing.  [Ending Thoughts] I thought this was an excellent story that followed the prompt perfectly. Abby and Sam were believable characters with a classic friendship. I enjoyed the twist at the end, it was a pleasant surprise. Not only were you able to capture the chaos of an editor, and writer, but also an element of mystery with a nice surprise. Well done!  
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