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| Hello, I am reviewing your story as a judge for "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest"  . Thanks for entering! It has been a pleasure to read and review your work, please remember any thoughts or suggestions written or implied in my review are based only on my opinion. Thank you for entering and Good Luck! [Spelling Errors/Grammar] None that I could find.  [Ending Thoughts] I enjoyed this very original take on the prompt. The story you have told is intriguing as the main character is mistaken, yet the descriptions and dialogue help carry the reader through to the end. I enjoyed the ending itself as that which made me want to read more. I thought this was well written and if you so choose to add more, I'd love to read it. Well done!  
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