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| (4.0)| Hello, I am reviewing your story as a judge for "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest" . Thanks for entering! It has been a pleasure to read and review your work, please remember any thoughts or suggestions written or implied in my review are based only on my opinion. Thank you for entering and Good Luck! [Spelling Errors/Grammar] None that I could find.  [Ending Thoughts] I thought this was an intriguing take on the image prompt, and the prompt itself was loosely used with a slight reference to it at the end. The beginning was gruesome to say the least, and took me awhile to actually catch on to how it connected to the rest of the story. Sally and Robert were excellent characters, and I enjoyed the banter between them. Overall, I thought it was an interesting story. Well done!  
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You responded to this review 08/29/2016 @ 8:06am EDT