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Review of Indigo  
Review by Lonewolf
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello, I am reviewing your story as a judge for "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest" . Thanks for entering! It has been a pleasure to read and review your work, please remember any thoughts or suggestions written or implied in my review are based only on my opinion. Thank you for entering and Good Luck!




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None that I could find.


*Pencil* [Ending Thoughts]
I thought this was a great take on the image prompt. I enjoyed how you tied the image into the story itself, and the character Lina was perfect for the story you have told here. The descriptions used kept me glued to the story from the beginning. Well done!





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