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Just a Little Magic  [E]
Even a little magic is a dangerous thing.
by Paul D
Review by Lonewolf
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello, I am reviewing your story as a judge for "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest" . Thanks for entering! It has been a pleasure to read and review your work, please remember any thoughts or suggestions written or implied in my review are based only on my opinion. Thank you for entering and Good Luck!




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None that I could find.

*Pencil* [Ending Thoughts]

I enjoyed this story a lot, especially Sarah, she was an interesting character. The image prompt was used well, and the descriptions painted a clear picture of the character and her plight for the magic to work. I thought the ending was perfect as well, to which your reader can get to easily as there were no errors, nor a lack of action or dialogue that didn't help the story progress. Well done!




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