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Hello, I am reviewing your story as a judge for "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest" . Thanks for entering! It has been a pleasure to read and review your work, please remember any thoughts or suggestions written or implied in my review are based only on my opinion. Thank you for entering and Good Luck!




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None that I could find.

*Pencil* [Ending Thoughts]
I thought this was an interesting story you have told set in a time long ago. I thought the use of the image prompt was good as it is described well. I enjoyed the originality of the story as a whole, and was able to read the story easily because of the carefully drawn characters. I thought the ending was great and the epilogue only added to the story. Well done!





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