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Descending into Freedom  [18+]
Two friends have to become lost in order to find themselves.
by Graham B.
Review by Lonewolf
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hello, I am reviewing your story as a judge for "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest" . Thanks for entering! It has been a pleasure to read and review your work, please remember any thoughts or suggestions written or implied in my review are based only on my opinion. Thank you for entering and Good Luck!




*Tools* [Spelling Errors/Grammar]
None that I could find.


*Pencil* [Ending Thoughts]

I thought this used the image prompt perfectly. Mark and Jimmy were both believable as bestfriends, and the dialogue between the both were great. The story had all the aspects of a good story, action, very descriptive images, and no errors. I enjoyed the story from beginning to end. Well done!




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