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Review by Lonewolf
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hello, I am reviewing your story as a judge for "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest" . Thanks for entering! It has been a pleasure to read and review your work, please remember any thoughts or suggestions written or implied in my review are based only on my opinion. Thank you for entering and Good Luck!




*Tools* [Spelling Errors/Grammar]
None that I could find.


*Pencil* [Ending Thoughts]
I thoroughly enjoyed the story that you have told here. I felt the characters were well created, and the detail packed in drew me into the tale. I couldn't see how the image played a role in any of this however. I would like for you to possibly expand on the story itself to turn it into a possible novella of some sort. Well done!





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