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| Hello, I am reviewing your story as a judge for "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest"  . Thanks for entering! It has been a pleasure to read and review your work, please remember any thoughts or suggestions written or implied in my review are based only on my opinion. Thank you for entering and Good Luck! [Spelling Errors/Grammar] None that I could find.  [Ending Thoughts] I loved your story. I felt this was a well developed tale that was written to perfection. The dialogue between the characters, especially Gavalien were made for this short you have written. I think if possible you could continue the story in some form or fashion after the contest as I could love to read more. The image prompt was used expertly in the story and proved to be a great inspiration for this. Well done!  
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You responded to this review 08/23/2016 @ 1:18pm EDT