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 The Cave  [13+]
Haunted by memories, she returns for the last time. Short Shots
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Review of The Cave  
Review by Lonewolf
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello, I am reviewing your story as a judge for "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest" . Thanks for entering! It has been a pleasure to read and review your work, please remember any thoughts or suggestions written or implied in my review are based only on my opinion. Thank you for entering and Good Luck!




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None that I could find.

*Pencil* [Ending Thoughts]
Princess you never fail to deliver. This story you have created was very well written, and the use of the image prompt was perfect. The characters were well developed, and descriptions it all made for an easy read. The amount of detail and overall feel of the piece made me want to read more. Well done!




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