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Roseberg, Then and Now  [13+]
250 years divided her timeline, there is nothing in common
by Cheri Annemos
Review by Lonewolf
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hello, I am reviewing your story as a judge for "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest" . Thanks for entering! It has been a pleasure to read and review your work, please remember any thoughts or suggestions written or implied in my review are based only on my opinion. Thank you for entering and Good Luck!




*Tools* [Spelling Errors/Grammar]
None that I could find.

*Pencil* [Ending Thoughts]
I think this was an intriguing story you told. The descriptions as well as the well placed use of the image prompt made for an easy read. Evangeline was a well developed character that found herself in a odd situation. The dialogue along with the descriptions painted a perfect picture which allowed me to see what the character was feeling and seeing. well done!





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