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Hello, I am reviewing your story as a judge for "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest" . Thanks for entering! It has been a pleasure to read and review your work, please remember any thoughts or suggestions written or implied in my review are based only on my opinion. Thank you for entering and Good Luck!




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None that I could find.

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I loved the creative direction your story has taken. I felt the dialogue in the very beginning captured my attention right away. The use of the image prompt was described very well along with everything else which made for an easy read. I thought Miranda and others returning in hopes to find their parents possibly alive was a bitter sweet ending. Overall a great read. Well done!





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