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I wish I knew how to use the review tool. I hope I can figure this out. My review disappeared a few times.

Your rhythm and line count are right on. Good beginning, drawing breath. Then you last line of the poem made my heart ache. You drew me in and then held me by the throat.

I hope this isn't based on you. Let me know if it is.

You fit a lifetime in your poem very well in such a short time.
So very well done.
I need to read something happy now.
Thanks for sharing.
love, LinnAnn
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