The rhythm was a bit off, I had to work to keep the cadence. I even counted syllables. Good most of the way through. Just a thought. As a reader, I didn't want to work so hard, I wanted to just get immersed.

This is a horrifying poem. My marriage wasn't that bad, but I've lived through enough to totally empathize

You did a great job at getting your message across. I sure hope this isn't real.
Thanks for sharing.
Love, LinnAnn