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 Renewed Spirit  [ASR]
A poetic story, Life after death, Sum of lifes worth
by ~VAL♥sBaby♥Dylan~
Review of Renewed Spirit  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hello!again

I like this thoughtful poem. It describing what happens after death. The poet could hear lying on the hospital bed that the angels above her whispering “what shall happen with her?”

She imagined that the angels will lead her to the afterlife. You wrote this poem beautifully. The tone is soothing that kept me reading to the end. I like the lines
“I give my life to God
As I did there on Earth
For living in God’s light
Can truly sum your worth”

I enjoyed your poem. A beautiful poem, great write and the way you displayed life after death.

These are my thoughts and ideas alone.

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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