This is an amazing poem, and it shows a lot more about the reality. As the children grown up they leave their parents. You beautifully wrote how mothers feel for her children. In mother’s heart, each child will always be her kid..
Favorite lines: The chubby, little feet pushing along the floor, at some wee hour of the morn;
Noisily appearing at the bedroom door.
Thank you for sharing and allowing me reading and reviewing your work. I really enjoyed and learned a lot from this.
Happy Writing!
mina
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