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Nathan the Ninja Warrior  [13+]
Nathan discovers his powers and saves his village from a sea monster.
by Winnie Kay
Review by Mina~
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello, Ms. Winnie

I read this when I come across adventure genre list. The way you wrote this makes me reading it from beginning to the end.

How Nathan discovers his powers and saves his village from a sea monster. Before Nathan born a hunter’s mighty sword feel to earth at Winnie’s feet. She kept the heavy sword herself for her nephew. Waiting for the moment.
Sea monster attack him one day and Nathan fought fiercely with the mighty sword and killed the monster.

The conversation between the characters flows smoothly. I found it very entertaining. Thank you for sharing and allowing me reading and reviewing your work. I really enjoyed and learned a lot from this.


Happy Writing!

mina  


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