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 Modern Pentathlon Acrostic  [E]
An acrostic about the Summer Olympic event, the Modern Pentathlon
by Schnujo is Late to Lannister
Review by Bobbi
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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I found this little ditty in the Non-Fiction folder of your port, and as I am a total sucker for different and interesting styles and forms of poetry, I couldn't resist this rather informative tribute to the Pentathlon of the Olympics. It followed the rules of the acrostic form and was enjoyable, which is why I rated the item with four stars. Here, again, is my policy for rating and reviewing: "Bobbi's Rating and/or Reviewing Policy" . If you have any questions about your rate and review, please feel free to drop me a line. *Smile*


A few things I noticed as a reader:

This is one of the more lighthearted poem forms, and also one that is more of a pain to do on the WdC format, so hats off to you for going for it. *CowboyHat* For the uninitiated in Public Review land, the following link will inform you about the Acrostic Form  . The poem states many interesting facts about one heck of an event. These athletes are pretty hard-core to attempt to become proficient at so many things at once. *Shock*

Probably the most impressive thing about the poem is how you managed to work the WritingML on it to look like what an acrostic should with all the important letters lining up relatively well. That had to have been a pain, though I must confess that I haven't had a chance to look it over on my other mediums yet. I do wonder if it looks as good on my laptop, as I have noticed that there is a big difference between laptop, desktop, and tablet (which is still MIA *Sad*).

The capitalization is consistent as is the punctuation (or lack thereof, in this case). I don't see any obvious typos, so it all looks good. Kudos! *Thumbsupl*

Thank you for allowing me to review your piece. I'm just another reader and writer so use or discard any of my suggestions at your personal discretion. If you make changes and would like me to reassess your piece, feel free to e-mail me. *Mail*

Keep writing and keep improving! *ThumbsUpL*

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