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Boy, if they have any kind of Halloween contest you could enter this. This was sort of nice to begin with, I love ocean things, and then it got so creepy. lol That 'ultimate, dark sin--'. I read it to a worker here at taco bell, and she agreed "It started out so nice..." so if you were going to creep out, you hit it right on the head!

I wasn't sure if the 'pulled from my throat' meant your skeleton would jump out of you, or if a scream would erupt.

Thanks for sharing. shudder. lol
love, LinnAnn
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