Greetings, Sharon ! Thank you for submitting your entry in the "Writing 4 Kids Contest " .

Prompt: Use the following words in a story (750 words or less) or a poem (28 lines or less.) Please bold the prompted words or use colored font (or both) so they stand out. *Wink* If you prefer to underline your prompted words, that's fine, too. Just as long as the following words are easily spotted.

buried treasure
alligator
missing shoe
camp
pail

I had no problems, whatsoever, visualizing the entire story. Very cute, indeed! Good job.

My only suggestion, which is so small, it's hardly worth mentioning, is that you might consider using an exclamation point vs a comma with dialogue tagged with the word yelled.

I especially liked... how you ended your story! It put a big smile on my face! I really liked:

[...] and take that annoying clock off his collar.”

Best of luck in the contest!

Have a great day and...
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !

Cubby ")



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