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 Welcome to WDC Cassie ames! I am happy to do a review to celebrate you!  I was drawn to the title as the theme is one to which many can relate and I recall lots of times being advised to just "let go" as if it is easy! Sometimes yes, other times, no. So I was curious to see your perspective.  The free style without defined format suits the content and reflective tone of the poem. The three verses are balanced and the last line of each gives a sense of closure to each one. I like how each verse has a different action: look, hope, know. I like the image of "sting"! I wondered about using a different idea for the third line in verse 4 as we see the "knowing" is the theme and you repeat "know" again. or instead of but--use Yet and the "know" is more for emphasis.  Just pondering here. It made me curious as to the event that is spoken of.   Thanks for sharing your vision that shows me a process that our mind goes through in making these changes where we have to let go. I can feel the reluctance.  Light on the path as you write on! eyestar ** Image ID #1815342 Unavailable **  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!"  .
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You responded to this review 09/14/2016 @ 6:23pm EDT