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 |  | Caesar's Limerick  [13+] Limerick for Panda's Poetry Contest  |
| (5.0)  HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"    HI thing! I am here with a review to celebrate you!    This is priceless and I had a great laugh! I thought the idea in the last verse was astute as well! "make it a song"! Marvelous! You really picked a unique theme for a limerick too. Take a tragedy of Shakespeare no less and make it comical! Brilliant! It really deserves its ribbon! The limerick form is well constructed and your rhyme is stellar. I so enjoyed the word "seizures" with "caesar". Creative play! It was pleasant to read for its flow and soundscape and the story within the verses was coherent. The last one acted as a commentary on the story, which was a wonderful notion.The last lines are strong punch lines. The only idea that through me as that "March ended...life" but then I realized that the technique of personification works here.Thanks for creating this entertaining limerick. I really had fun entering your vision!  Light on the path as you write on!! eyestar ** Image ID #1815342 Unavailable ** "Invalid Item"  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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