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 HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"     HI Lina! Happy Anniversary! I am here with a review to celebrate you!  Wow! I was expecting the topic to be uplifting and yet you really made me get a sense of how strong hope can be under the weight of your defining poem.  The personification is well done.The form is well constructed and is an interesting one. I imagine it took time to get it right. The syllabication is awesome with the chosen words that create a heavy feeling and vivid image. I read it aloud and it has effective tone and sound elements with assonance, consonance and alliteration all adding to coherency and flow. It has a depressing aura and I like that the last line is the weightiest. The form is so well chosen for the theme. I did wonder if punctuation would be assistive and yet it feels that the short lines do give us pause between each one. Reminds me of japanese forms. I feel the potency in this expression and felt sad. Poverty is a huge issue in the world, when it does not have to be. When will we all wake up? Thanks for sharing your vision and craft.Light on the path as you write on!! eyestar ** Image ID #1815342 Unavailable **  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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