Oh, I just love this tale of the Headless Horseman, in poetic form. It's getting toward that time of year when Halloween stories begin to fill the airways, videos, and writing on this site. Yes, It is my favorite time of year. But what would one expect from a little ol' witchie, eh? Loved the imagery you painted for me. I could feel the spirit of of it, and actually see the horseman traveling through the wooded areas, hearing the hoof beats and feeling the chill of his presence as I read through the lines. It was a fine melodious flow, with a huge story in a handful of verses. That speaks volumes for your talent, Mr. Man. I don't see a speck of an area that you need to spruce-up. It is perfectly fabulous the way it is. I enjoy having you back on the site and writing your poetry, again. Great work! Until next time--write on! Regards, WebWitch My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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