We All Need A Monster Under The Bed [E] Entry for Writer's Cramp 20 Sep 2016 |
Greetings flyfishercacher ! A Review from "Simply Positive Review Forum " ! Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! What brought the Hand of THiNG to your port? I am the judge for today in "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week" . Thanks for entering! You are sort of new so I am welcoming you also! What Does THiNG think about while perusing your item? A young man gets direction in life from a helpful spirit in this fine short story. The message to Pay it Forward comes through loud and clear as advice is given to pivot and focus on the needs of others and things beyond the self interest of youth. What does THiNG applaud about while reading your item? I always applaud the notion that paying it forward is better than taking for one's own selfish needs. When you focus on others you help yourself in ways that can only be imagined. This is a very creative story with a positive message about changing a selfish life into a meaningful one. Sometimes that which lurks under the bed can be a great deal of help if we get beyond the scariness quotient. Fine story! THiNG a.k.a. HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. 4ps SometHiNg I am not an expert on poetry or prose. I am merely a reader who loves to read and a judge for this contest today. I am not a proofreader and would rather do most anything else rather than proof read. That is what proofreaders get paid to do. I share my experiences and thoughts when I read and try not to blabber on too much. I enjoyed visiting with you! END OF SometHiNg Ta Ta until we meet again.... "Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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