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Greetings, jessenovels7


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First Impressions: "Invalid Item"  is a very short poem, a free-verse work that is highly reflective on life and its situations.



Overall Impact: I think the author wants to impose wisdom upon those growing up, those who while young might not realize that they are missing things, that indeed we ALL are missing things, and yet, through older and wiser minds, are also retaining things and gaining new perspectives...



Errors: Later in the poem, I believe you should take "apart" - one word - and make it into two words..." a part." It will sound better and be correct spelling too...



Summation: A heavy dose of wisdom in this work for all those who might take a moment to give it consideration! I like this work and wholeheartedly would advise that this author contine to write and continue to lenghten this further!




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