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What brought the Hand of THiNG to your port?

I am the judge for today in "The Writer's Cramp" . Thanks for entering and Happy 3rd Account Anniversary today!

What Does THiNG think about while perusing your item?

I think that you set the scene very well for having survived something devastating like a tornado or a bomb dropping on one's house. I am not sure there is much difference between the two of those.

The survivors are a grateful human and her beloved dog, Roscoe.

The love for Roscoe is shown in that her first concern is getting food and water for the pup.

You did a good job of using the prompt sentence. The only thing is that it is supposed to be at the end (per the judge's instructions) and not the beginning. It works well with your story either way. To awaken or emerge to such chaos would be a shock of enormous proportions.

What does THiNG applaud about while reading your item?

I think that counting one's blessings is always a good thing. It is truly a blessing to survive such devastation. I love how you show the devotion in her declaration that she will not leave the dog.

Lovely story that made me want to hug my own Boo. Never in a million years would I leave her in a such a situation.

Very well written story! Fine work!



THiNG a.k.a. HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. 4ps

SometHiNg

I am not an expert on poetry or prose. I am merely a reader who loves to read. I am not a proofreader and would rather do most anything else rather than proof read. That is what proofreaders get paid to do. I share my experiences when I read and try not to blabber on too much. I enjoyed visiting with you!

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