Greetings bogengine!





What brought the Hand of THiNG to your port?

I am the judge for today in "The Writer's Cramp" . Thanks for entering and welcome to the site as you are technically still a Newbie!

What Does THiNG think about while perusing your item?

Your story is very short, but it conveys a lot of anger and emotion directed towards a boss of some sort named, Arman. Arman does not believe in appreciating or paying those who work for him and someone is quite steamed about it.

You did a fine job with incorporating the prompt at the end of the story.

What does THiNG applaud about while reading your item?

I sense that this is building up to a big confrontation to come with the speaker and Arman. It seems like Arman is very inconsiderate and not fun to be with and he picks boring locations to hang people out to dry.

I learned a lot about Arman in just a little bit of text and time. I am already rooting for the speaker to figure it out and do whatever it is that Arman truly deserves.

Very entertaining and well written. It raises questions, but it also leaves me disliking Arman, who I hardly know. I feel like I know him and he is every boss in some ways.

Well done!


THiNG a.k.a. HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. 4ps

SometHiNg

I am not an expert on poetry or prose. I am merely a reader who loves to read. I am not a proofreader and would rather do most anything else rather than proof read. That is what proofreaders get paid to do. I share my experiences when I read and try not to blabber on too much. I enjoyed visiting with you!

END OF SometHiNg

Ta Ta until we meet again....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .