Greetings Jatog the Green !



What brought the Hand of THiNG to your port?

I am the judge for today in "The Writer's Cramp" . Thanks for entering!

What Does THiNG think about while perusing your item?

I thought about eating and it did not make the process seem appetizing. This is like spending too much time watching The Food Network. You get so it is all you think about.

Well, dieting I know about, too. But maybe you are talking about something else like the way we hog things in the environment. Or it could apply to people who grab and loot things that don't belong to them and destroy whatever's in their path.

All are gluttonous and selfish so and sos.

What does THiNG applaud about while reading your item?

This part actually reminded me of someone I used to know:

"Add to that, though, those masticating
smacks, those snaps of whip-like tongues from incisors
to the roof of mouth, and then the dieting discomfort
climbed a ladder and dangled, holding on with one
arm. "

I don't miss her much now that she's gone. You might say that silence is golden.

Thanks for ending the poem with the prompt sentence. It fits very well! Bravo!



THiNG a.k.a. HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. 4ps

SometHiNg

I am not an expert on poetry or prose. I am merely a reader who loves to read and the judge for today in The Writer's Cramp. I am not a proofreader and would rather do most anything else rather than proof read. That is what proofreaders get paid to do. I share my experiences when I read and try not to blabber on too much. Sometimes I get it and sometimes I don't get it. Today, I am not sure I got it, but it did have meaning for me. I enjoyed visiting with you!

END OF SometHiNg

Ta Ta until we meet again....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 


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