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A Review from "Simply Positive Review Forum " ! What brought the Hand of THiNG to your port? You have invited me to read your latest poem, so here I am to read and send a review. Thank you for the invitation. What Does THiNG think about while perusing your item? The experience of a solar eclipse has inspired a lovely poem on what coincidentally is your parents' anniversary date. So, the date is memorable for a multitude of reasons. What does THiNG applaud about while reading your item? I especially like this part: "As the luminous moon is bid to veil the dazzling sun As it casts its amazing antumbra Upon the terrestrial sphere, aqua and terrafirma " This is a very majestic use of language in describing the natural phenomenon. Well done! THiNG a.k.a. HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. 4ps SometHiNg I am not an expert on poetry or prose. I am merely a reader who loves to read. I am not a proofreader and would rather do most anything else rather than proof read. That is what proofreaders get paid to do. This is a rare experience you have shared through poetry. I share my (sometimes limited) experiences and thoughts when I read and try not to blabber on too much. I enjoyed visiting with you! END OF SometHiNg Ta Ta until we meet again.... "Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such"
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