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Rated: E | (4.5)
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What brought the Hand of THiNG to your port?

*Ghost* You have invited me to read your latest poem, so here I am to read and send a review. Thank you for the invitation.

What Does THiNG think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* The experience of a solar eclipse has inspired a lovely poem on what coincidentally is your parents' anniversary date.

So, the date is memorable for a multitude of reasons.

What does THiNG applaud about while reading your item?

I especially like this part:

"As the luminous moon is bid to veil the dazzling sun
As it casts its amazing antumbra
Upon the terrestrial sphere, aqua and terrafirma "

This is a very majestic use of language in describing the natural phenomenon. Well done!
*Thumbsup*

THiNG a.k.a. HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. 4ps

*Pumpkin*SometHiNg*Witchhat*

I am not an expert on poetry or prose. I am merely a reader who loves to read. I am not a proofreader and would rather do most anything else rather than proof read. That is what proofreaders get paid to do. This is a rare experience you have shared through poetry. I share my (sometimes limited) experiences and thoughts when I read and try not to blabber on too much. I enjoyed visiting with you!

*Leaf*END OF SometHiNg*Leaf*



Ta Ta until we meet again....

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