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 The Ballad of Willy Rand  [E]
A poem about a teacher and former pupil meeting again after many years.
by Jalan
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Loved the line in the fourth verse about 'a boy contrary'.

Dog gone it. You made me cry when you told of Willy crying. So obviously you drew me in and held my attention.

'as if in a fetter'...I'll have to look that one up when I get home. lol

I'm at the library, and you are making me cry my head off.

I used to be a teacher. I have one student that has kept in touch.
Thank you for sharing this poem with me.
love, LinnAnn

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