just a thought, but I'd take out 'the' in the second line.
I'd put a ' in front of round since you're taking out the a in front.
I'd take out the 'flying' in flying bat, it's already clean

'until the time to go' you could leave off 'the'

I really enjoyed your poem! What a fun piece of work. You caught and held my attention very well. The Warlocks wine, was funny. I'll have to borrow that for my punch if I have a party this year.
Thanks so much for sharing.
Love, LinnAnn