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I love the first two lines. Really!
I was having a bit of trouble reading the poem in other places though. I pause at the end of a line, thinking that is where I should, but it didn't make sense.
The flow was hard to find, where do I pause?
I do love the poem though. Good imagery. But my favorite is the first two lines. It's that cool!
Thanks for sharing.
love, LinnAnn
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