I found your style in this poem a bit confusing. I can't remember all of them, can you tell me? The first two lines rhymed in each verse, but the second two didn't rhyme with each other or other lines.
There were a couple of spots where the cadence threw me off.
Accept the things?
When jealously, do you mean jealousy?
You might think of putting a comma after 'life is not fair'.

This was a very uplifting poem. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.
love, LinnAnn