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Time's Deceit  [E]
Time can be deceptive to the young. [The Neville]
by Winnie Kay
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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That is something amazing the picture you put in with the poem. Your poem was really thought provoking. The style was great, easy to read, rhythm was easy and cadence worked great.

Your first word really set the stage, and the last line really said it all. Age does creep up on us, and it seems so quickly too.

Thanks so much for sharing this with us.
love, LinnAnn
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