Found your item in the Comedy NL 10-12-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Super dooper!
The rhyming is a big 10!
The emotion is contentment.
The form is short and sweet.
The pace is slow and yet not crawling like a stalking cat.
There is no evidence of grammatical snafus, and thanks for sharing such a fine piece that the editor of the Comedy NL found so many years later.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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