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 The dream-catcher.  [E]
A short poem about the effects of a dreamcatcher.
by inkwell
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello inkwell

This is a wonderfully descriptive little poem about the positive effects of a dream-catcher as protector, enabling peaceful sleep. Your words flow well, and I particularly like how 'dream-catcher' works with 'saviour' in your penultimate line, in terms of how the words sound. You mention children but I think many adults get comfort from dream-catchers too.

I very much enjoyed this poem. Thanks for sharing.

Best wishes,
Mark


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