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Hello groovygirl

This is a delightful, fantasy poem with wonderful humour. The bit about the spotted underwear made me chuckle aloud (in a public library). I really love the charcter of the dragon bride.

This poem is very well constructed. Very rhythmic with great use of rhyme. I think it would work very well read aloud.

This richly deserves its awardicon and I have no suggestions for changes. I love it just as it is and have no hesitation giving it a full five star waiting.

Great work :D

Best wishes,
Mark


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