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 Love is not  [13+]
An observation
by Mouser
Review of Love is not  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello Mouser

It's hard to write love poetry without repeating what's been said thousands of times before. It is such a common theme. However, this poem's focus on what love is not rather than what it is gives it some originality. I really like how you've structured the poem. It flows well and you've chosen your words with care. I particularly like the subtle reference to Romeo and Juliet.

Nice work!

Best wishes,
Mark


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